I just went over what I've written of "Shop Talk" and like a drunk waking up the next morning, realized that I said some things prematurely. What I posted is literally a shitty first draft. Nothing wrong with that but I have decided to do some work on the story before posting an improved (?) version in a few weeks. If anyone is still interested or gives a shit that is. Feel free to read what I got, offer an opinion of where you think it's headed or whatever and we'll see what happens together. Thanks.